In my project I wrote about what is good writing. I interviewed a high school student, college students and my parents. I also used my ideas on what I thought good writing is. I am still working on comparing each answer that I was given for a last paragraph to finish the paper and I’m still working on rewording some sentences. I thought it wasn’t really easy to have good transition or to a good flow throughout the rough draft. Something that would help me would help me would by giving me feedback on how I could transition from different paragraphs.
i loved reading what you had to say about writing you had some very interesting facts.
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i felt that you knew exactly where you were trying to go when writing this and you hit all the main points throughout.
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i look forward to this whole project coming together overall i think this was a great rough draft
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the only thing i could find was a little issue there were a few spelling errors but noting to major great job!
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