In need of a peer review.
Something I will put in later is another view of reading and writing to connect it to the story I already have.
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In need of a peer review.
Something I will put in later is another view of reading and writing to connect it to the story I already have.
Morgan Jones - Portfolio 
I like how you started your story and some of the things I think you should work on is maybe explain how Ms. Driggers helped you and showed you the way.
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Put more details and expand the idea.
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I also liked that you addressed Brandt’s literacy of sponsors in your writing.
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Overall, it was interesting and understandable.
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“Without having read The Outsiders, I would have never read the novel if it was for someone pushing me along.” this was very confusing to read. Try to reword it to make it more clear.
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You seem to be repeating yourself over and over again. Try to diversify.
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hi
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Do you only have one sponsor? Do you know anyone else who has been a literary sponsor.
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The topic is entertains, just try to not repeat yourself.
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