“The artist tweeted “Positive Affirmation for today: I WILL have a good day, I Will succeed today, Wendy’s WILL bring back spicy nuggets at some point please please Lord let it be today.” As a surprise Wendy’s replied “Y’all keep asking, so here’s your chance. The people in charge say if you guys can get our tweet (this one right here) to 2 Million likes, they will bring SPICY CHICKEN NUGGETS BACK. Let’s freakin’ do this!”, Seems like Wendy’s challenged the artist in order to bring back their spicy nuggets.” This seems to be 2 different fonts or colors. be sure to fix that later.
Try to make it more fun and pleasing to the eye. It’s very structured and draws people away.
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Your findings were very confusing try to make it more clear what I am looking at.
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I think your format could be more inviting maybe as some familiar faces of celebrities that have done what chance did.
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“The artist tweeted “Positive Affirmation for today: I WILL have a good day, I Will succeed today, Wendy’s WILL bring back spicy nuggets at some point please please Lord let it be today.” As a surprise Wendy’s replied “Y’all keep asking, so here’s your chance. The people in charge say if you guys can get our tweet (this one right here) to 2 Million likes, they will bring SPICY CHICKEN NUGGETS BACK. Let’s freakin’ do this!”, Seems like Wendy’s challenged the artist in order to bring back their spicy nuggets.” This seems to be 2 different fonts or colors. be sure to fix that later.
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If you guys could find more cases where this is happens with celebrities and companies it might be good to compare stats.
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The formatting and everything else flows together.
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I know you had an idea, but I wasn’t sure if there was an actual question stated. if possible, try to make that more clear to the reader.
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You guys just need to work on the discussion and the conclusion part like get it there in time before it’s too late.
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It’s good that you guys did lot of research and had evidence to back it up.
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once you guys add the discussion remember to make sure that it flows smoothly with the rest of it your essay
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I really like how you guys use the twitter screenshots it really amped up your paper love it !!!!!!!!!
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Another thing is to change the fronts so they are all the same.
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